Floating

Walking barefoot to the edge of the rock
Looking down, second guessing
Jumping into the bluest of waters
Face covered with water, arms pulling back to the surface
Floating adrift to the shore
Looking back wanting more
Watching others taking turns
Hearing faint screams as they jump

This piece was written in response to a Free Write Friday prompt

4 Comments

kellieelmore
/ June 14, 2012

So glad you posted, never worry about being late. I’d rather have it late than never =) Great breaks of streaming thoughts and visuals. Reminds me of this small waterfall at the river where we spend the summer, Everyone goes there to jump and I like to float out away from it and watch them. Thanks for the memory and for writing for FWF! =)

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- We're Jumpin'
  / June 14, 2012
  
  Thank you so much for coming by and checking out my post.
  I love that I could bring back memories for you. I have never jumped from a cliff into the ocean, but It seems like a peaceful experience. (I have jumped from a high dive into a swimming pool though) 😀
Starlite
/ June 14, 2012

This is BEAUTIFUL!!! And it’s so relaxing to watch this clip! Thanks for sharing this post!!!

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- We're Jumpin'
  / June 14, 2012
  
  You’re welcome and thank you so much for taking the time to read.